Title: Should the school ban unhealthy food
Everyone knows that unhealthy food should be banned in schools because it causes many diseases such as cancer, obesity, Diabetes, Hypertension, and more.
It is obvious that school canteens should sell much healthier food and give them much more water milk and beverages For example kids argue about the cafeteria.Some of the kids say that they sell disgusting food and they would like some yummy food like pies and cake but i think they should give the kids some healthy food so they can be fit and strong.
Another important point is that schools should have more gardens and trees so they can have a healthier life and they can harvest and eat. Cause if they don’t have any fruits and veggies then they are going to get diseases like diabetes.
In addition to that, when it is someone’s birthday and they are celebrating it at school, then make sure you look carefully at the food and tell yourself what is the right thing to eat. Because think carefully about what you are eating cause there might be heaps of sugar and heaps of salt in the food.
To review what happened about this text that i read about should schools banned unhealthy food, I read that they should sell healthy food and they should be grateful cause the people that sell the food in the cafeteria are working very hard and they stayed all day to cook while you guys work so remember be grateful and always have positive attitude.
Kia ora Lesley my name is Brooklyn, I am a year 7 student at Paihia School. I liked your blog post about persuasive text. I also liked how you wrote in your writing that school should have less unhealthy food. Schools should have more gardens and more trees around. I really agree with you that school need more healthy food in their canteens and in cafeterias. Your post reminds me of when my old school when they only had healthy food a whole day.
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I totally agree Lesley, that something we need to look at and consider, it's for the best for everyone. School is where kids spend most of their days at and eating at. So, we should get into healthy eating.
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